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promising.

The quality of art was pretty basic, but very stylized so it suited the animation well. I wouldn't change anything about that. The white blog changing shapes + beepy music reminded me of the old game "A Boy and his Blob", haha.
My main gripe would be the length, and the lack of purpose. It would be really hilarious/interesting to see this featureless little guy walking around or going somewhere during the music, instead of just staying in the 1 shot. Definitely a good basis for something in the future, though!!

Rutger responds:

Thanks! You definatly motivate me C:

Room for improvement

It looks like you did a good bit of work developing the plot, but as a trailer I'm not sure I really like this. The screamo song really killed the mood for me (it doesn't seem to go with the style of art and plotline). Also the spoken dialogue at the beginning, while showing text gets confusing, I had no idea whether to listen to or to read the text. Besides that it looks pretty good though, I'll definitely watch the series when it comes out.

skarl3tte responds:

Thanks, I'll try to make the series less confusing.

Awesome!

Really well done. The artistic style and audio were spot on, and the bizarre voices/music were really catchy. My only gripe is the shakiness, I think that it's a style of animation that works well with this cartoon, but just tone it down a bit.

Confused..

I don't think any comedy was conveyed whatsoever in this, even though that seems to have been the purpose. I do commend you, though, for seeing it through to completion and fully animating it. That's definitely a lot more than many NG'ers tend to do. But the overall quality (audio, graphical, etc.) was poor enough that it was kind of a turn off.

cyotecody555 responds:

uh ok what is your point?

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